Question

“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用，在高三尤为重要。请你结合自身实际，按以下提示，准备一篇英语发言稿，在英语课上与同学们作交流。
目标的重要性；
如何设立目标；
谈谈你的近期目标；
如何实现你的目标。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
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Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you! 

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for seniors because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for. With a clear direction you will straightly get what you want.
In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What’s more, it’s essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step.
My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life. (127)
Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you!

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，主要让学生以“目标在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用，在高三尤为重要”为主题展开叙述，内容应从包括以下四个方面来：一 ：目标的重要性。二：如何设立目标。三：谈谈你的近期目标。四：如何实现你的目标。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如head for 朝…走，you will straightly get what you want你将直接得到你想要的东西（what引导的名词性从句），My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.（so that 引导的目的状语从句）not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.（notonly…but also 引导的并列句，且位于句首构成了倒装句，并且主语了句子的衔接如：What’s more，In my view等。