Question

假设你是李华，你从报纸上看到广告说A公司的平面设计部门正在招收实习生。请写一份求职电子邮件，介绍你的基本情况（高二学生，暑期曾在广告公司打工，有平面设计经验，爱好摄影，性格外向，有合作精神），并请求对方将具体资料发送到你的电子信箱。
注意：1. 词数100字左右。文章开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
2 可适当补充细节使文章完整。
参考词汇：实习生: intern    ; 平面设计: graphic design

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
From your advertisement in the newspaper, I have learned that your graphic design department is in need of interns. The job description sounds interesting and it is the kind of work I have wanted to do for quite a long time.
My name is Li Hua and I am a Senior Two student. During the past vacations, I took a part-time job in an advertisement company so I had some experience in graphic design. I take pleasure in photography during my spare time and I am outgoing . Besides, you will find out that I am a team player.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the job.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours ,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：要求写一份求职电子邮件，介绍你的基本情况，考生分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】 From your advertisement in the newspaper, I have learned that your graphic design department is in need of interns. 这句话用了in need of这个词组，The job description sounds interesting and it is the kind of work I have wanted to do for quite a long time. 这句话有定语从句， During the past vacations, I took a part-time job in
an advertisement company so I had some experience in graphic design.这句话用了结果状语从句， you will find out that I am a team player.这句话用了宾语从句，I am looking forward to hearing from you.这句话用了动名词。还有文章还用了Besides这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。,