Question

假设你是重庆朝阳中学学生刘洋，得知2013年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后非常的高兴，你有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请根据表格信息，用英语写一封自荐信。

个人信息	男，16岁，高三学生
性格和潜质	开朗，喜欢与人交往； 有良好的团队精神； 适应能力强。
学习与获奖情况	学习刻苦，成绩名列前茅； 曾获“希望英语”英语演讲全国一等奖。
个人爱好与特长	……

注意：1) 词数100左右；
2) 信的开头与结尾以为你写好（不计入总词汇）。
3）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
4) 参考词汇：
自主招生independent recruitment
英语演讲比赛 English Speech contest
团队精神 teamwork
Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Zhao Yang High School in Chongqing.
Yours Sincerely,     
Liu Yang

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Zhao Yang High School in Chongqing. I am more than glad when I get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland. I would like to apply for admission for taking part in the independent recruitment exams of your school.
I am a sixteen-year-old boy, who is studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy-going and good at communicating with others. I have made many friends and I can do well in a team. Meanwhile, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. My hobbies are playing basketball and football. I am also good at playing the violin.
As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. I am especially good at English, who have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest of Hope English. All this will enable me to continue my study in your university without having much trouble with a language barrier.
I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply.  
Yours sincerely,
LiuYang

试题分析：这是提纲式作文：要点以表格形式给出，要点比较全，因此考生只需要根据所给提纲，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。按顺序安排好材料。使用灵活多变的句式表达要点，不要遗漏，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】I am more than glad when I get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland.这句话用了同位语从句 ，I am a sixteen-year-old boy, who is studying in Senior 3. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，. I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment.这句话用了it做形式主语， I am especially good at English, who have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest of Hope English. 这句话也是用了定语从句，All this will enable me to continue my study in your university without having much trouble with a language barrier.这句话用了动名词。   I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration. 这句话用了take sth into consideration。还有文章还用了Meanwhile, 这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。