Question

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：
优点：
1.话题广泛；
2.图片丰富；
3.有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使文章连贯；
开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
As a student reader, I’m writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．                                                                          
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Dear editor,
As a student reader, I ’am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. For example, we can find different topics in the books, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have become interested in the subject.
However, many new words and expressions are hard for us to learn. Therefore, I’d like you to change them into easier ones.
Best regards
LI Hua

试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇范文观点明确，要点齐全，句式富有变化：These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，Even the students who used to dislike English have become interested in the subject.这句话用了定语从句，many new words and expressions are hard for us to learn.这句话用了：Sb/Sth is +adj +to do 这个句型，还有文章使用了 What’s more,  For example, such as However, Therefore,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。