Question

目前我国中学生的健康严重下降，引起了父母、学校和专家的忧虑。为解决这一问题，有人提出将体育纳入高考。结合实际，谈谈你的看法：
1.是否赞成体育纳入高考及原因；
2.简述健康与学习的关系；
3.你认为学校应该做些什么来提高学生的身体素质。
注意：
1. 词数 120 左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Answer 1

(1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations. (3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn. Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. （5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

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【亮点说明】 (1)The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts.这是同位语从句
(2)To have this problem solved, some people propose PE included as a subject in the College Entrance Examinations.这是不定式做目的状语
(3) I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. 这句话用了 ，Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task.这句话用了动名词做主语， It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in sports field.这句话用了it做形式主语，
（4）However, good health is an essential foundation upon which to learn.这句话用了定语从句。 Only when one is in good health can they guarantee efficient learning. 这句话用了倒装句。
（5）Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. 这句话用了it做形式主语，