Question

请阅读下面的名言，并谈谈自己对友情的看法。
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
谈感想 结合自己一次经历 以此为题
要求：1.内容必须包括： 
2.词数：120词。

Answer 1

Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.
Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. No man can make the most of his life without friends as he goes along.
Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and doubts all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with honesty.  We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.
In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.

试题分析：考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. 这句话是用了省略句，With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.这句话用了with复合结构， Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. 这句话用了定语从句， Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. 这句话用了现在分词做状语，Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.这句话用了定语从句， While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. 这句话用了省略句Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.这句话用了倒装句。