Question

假如你叫李华，你有一位叫Smith的美国朋友，他想来中国任教。刚好你校打算聘请一名外教，请你代表学校给他写封邀请信，内容包括：
1. 每周工作量;  2. 学生的英语水平;   3. 教学内容;
4. 担任学校英语俱乐部和校报顾问（advisor）。
注意：1. 词数100左右;   2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
                                                                                
                                                                               
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any questions, I’d be more than happy to help.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Smith,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school happens to be looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior students. If you would like to come, you can choose three of the following courses. Speaking, Writing, Listening. You need to teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take the courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides, you will also work as an advisor for the students English club and our school’s English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any questions, I’d be more than happy to help.
Yours
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一封书信，请你代表学校给你美国朋友sam写封邀请信,邀请他来学校任教。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生发挥的余地较小，只需要翻译成英语即可，写作的时候要把所有的要点都包括在内，不要遗漏。同时注意使用被动语态，倒装句等不同的句式，让文章充满变化，不要那么的死板。同时要使用高级的词汇和词组提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. 这句话有宾语从句，Our school happens to be looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior students.这句话用不定式做定语， If you would like to come, you can choose three of the following courses. Speaking, Writing, Listening. 这句话用了条件状语从句， The students who are going to take the courses have at least three years of English learning experience.这句话用了定语从句， you will also work as an advisor for the students English club and our school’s English newspaper.这句话用了work as“担当：，还有范文还使用了 Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。