Question

【题目】假设你是李华, 请根据你对下面一幅图片的观察, 给一家知名报社专栏“Voice Your Opinion”写一封信，谈谈你的观点与看法。

注意:1. 自选角度和内容;

2. 字数100 左右;

3. 信的开头和结尾已写好(不计入总词数)。

Dear editor,

In Chinese tradition, family reunion always plays a very important part in communication.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

In Chinese tradition, family reunion always plays a very important part in communication. When a national holiday falls, members of a family will probably gather together to visit the seniors and enjoy being with each other. In this picture, we can see that grandchildren of different ages are surrounding their granny. However, all of them merely focus their attention on smartphones and nobody seems to talk with their granny willingly. We can imagine how helpless and disappointed their granny is at the sight of this. Behind the picture also lies the fact that smartphones are depriving us of face-to-face communication with others, even among dearest ones. What a pity! I hope that we should respect the moments when we are together for a reunion and throw the smartphones aside !

Best wishes !

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文考查看图作文。首先考生应该认真读图，把握中心。一幅图常为议论文，时态通常用一般现在时，可以分为三段写，第一段概述照片内容，常用开头语有:In the picture above we can see...; There is a cartoon about...; As we can see in the picture...; From the picture,

we can see that...; 或者It can be seen/concluded from the picture that...等等。第二段描述这幅照片所展示何种社会现象及造成该现象的原因，这一段应该是重点，要详写。第三段谈谈你的观点和看法，常用句型有：From what has been mentioned above, we may conclude that...; Therefore, it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that...; It is clear, therefore, that...; All in all, what really matters is... 等等。

【范文亮点点评】

When a national holiday falls, members of a family will probably gather together to visit the seniors and enjoy being with each other.开门见山点明中心主题。

We can imagine how helpless and disappointed their granny is at the sight of this.使用了宾语从句和短语at the sight of。

Behind the picture also lies the fact that smartphones are depriving us of face-to-face communication with others, even among dearest ones.使用了倒装句式和that引导的同位语从句。

I hope that we should respect the moments when we are together for a reunion and throw the smartphones aside !使用了宾语从句和状语从句。