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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou’s performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds of cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, thank his fans for always supporting him. What memorable experience!

Answer 1

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【解析】试题分析：本文介绍一次难忘的经历——周杰伦广州演唱会。

1.此处是句子主语，所以用代词主格，故把me---I。

2.根据Last week,可知句子用一般过去时态，故把are---were。

3.介词of后面用指人用whom引导定语从句，故把who---whom。

4.根据one of，可知后面用名词复数，故把song---songs。

5.句意：我们都欢呼起来，大声喊出他的名字，有些人甚至高兴地叫了起来。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把but---and。

6.句意：被叫做Sunny Day的第七首歌曲。此处是过去分词做后置定语，故把it去掉。

7.根据it started to rain.和the concert was not interrupted可知上下句表示转折，故把Therefore---However。

8.句意：在雨中我们变得更兴奋。故把exciting--- excited。

9.此处是现在分词做伴随状态，故把thank--- thanking。

10.句意：多么令人难忘的一次经历！可知在What后面加a。