Question

书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是Tom, 是一名高一新生。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信，简要介绍自己的高中生活。
要点：
1）已经适应了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。
非常想念过去的老师和同学们；与现在的同学相处很好，对老师很满意。
自己一定努力学习，为的是三年以后能够上个好的大学。
注意：1）数80左右2）头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数
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Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.
Yours,
Tom

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你给自己的初中同学Jack写一封信，简要介绍自己的高中生活。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引导的原因状语从句和it做形式主语的句型，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等词，这样文章显得更连贯。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。