Question

【题目】随着微博的流行，中学生也纷纷开通微博，这引起了家长和老师的担忧。最近你们班围绕“学生是否应该开通微博？”这一话题进行了讨论。请根据下面图表所示信息用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍讨论结果，并发表自己的看法。

注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，作必要的发挥想象，不要简单翻译。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Nowadays, more and more students have created their own blogs, which has aroused / raised concern among parents and teachers. Recently our class have had a discussion about whether students should create micro blogs. Opinions are divided as follows.

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Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the chart, a quarter of the students approve of creating micro blogs because they can be free to voice their opinions. And one fifth of them feel relieved from study pressure by viewing interesting topics on micro bogs. Besides, 15% of them consider it convenient to share information and communicate with others, which helps them make more friends.

However, l0% of the students think it's a waste of time and energy to update blogs often. Furthermore, 15% of them complain that too much false information may have a bad effect on them. Meanwhile, the rest 15% argue that micro blogs may give away people's privacy because of network security problems.

From the chart, we can conclude that most students are in favor of micro blogs. In my opinion, micro blogs provide a platform for us to express initial feelings and get the latest information, but we should use it properly. Spend less times on it, chose the right information and our micro blogs will bring us more fun and help.

【解析】

本文是一篇图表作文，也是一篇议论文，要求考生根据图表内容，对“学生是否应该开通微博？”这一话题进行了讨论，全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第1步：审题。本文是一篇议论文，随着微博的流行，中学生也纷纷开通微博，这引起了家长和老师的担忧。要求考生根据图表内容，对“学生是否应该开通微博？”这一话题进行了讨论，全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 随着微博的流行，中学生也纷纷开通微博，这引起了家长和老师的担忧。2.微博的好处：看微博可以减轻压力；看微博可以分享信息、交流思想和交朋友；利用微博表达心声。微博的坏处：经常更新微博，浪费时间和精力；网络不安全，泄露个人隐私；虚假信息、产生不好影响。3个人观点：微博是一个得到有用信息的好平台，要合理运用，不要沉溺其中。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为approve of、voice their opinions、feel relieved from study pressure、convenient、communicate with others、a waste of time、complain等，写作时注意议论文的格式。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。