Question

假设你是红旗中学高二一班的学生小明，你班将举行《我的梦想》（My Dream）的英文主题班会。请写一篇发言稿，在班会上与同学进行交流。要点如下：
1、梦想职业---记者；
2、职业要求：思维敏捷，有创造力，对事情有独特观点；
3、自己的两点优势（考生自由发挥）；
4、为实现目标而努力。
注意：
1. 词数不少于120。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist.

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist. As far as I know, it is a great challenge to be a journalist. First of all, we have to be sharp in mind so as to react to different situations quickly. Secondly, creativity can help us produce outstanding ideas. What’s more, it is necessary for us to hold unique opinions towards hot issues.
Just as you see, my qualities just meet the requirements above. Besides, I am social and love communicating with different people. It is an essential character helping me gather a wide variety of news materials. And I have plenty of hobbies, which inspire me to have the passion of covering stories in different fields.
I believe all these can make me a good journalist as long as I am committed and never give up.

试题分析：本文是一篇发言稿。文章首句已写好，第一个要点也已经写好。写作的要点集中在写“记者的职业要求”及“我的优势”。职业要求包括三点：1.思维敏捷2。有创造力3.对事情有独特观。可以用一些表示并列的词或递进的词进行连接。如：First of all，Secondly， What’s more等词。其中“我的优势”部分，需要自己发挥，写出两点优势。属于半开放型作文。同样可用一些词进行层次连接。文章最后表达我的决心：为实现目标而努力。
点评：谈论有关理想的发言稿。第一部分：开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题——理想是什么，第二部分：说明理由：为什么选择这一理想。如：对理想的认识，个人具备的优势。常用到的连接成分有：first of all,secondly,finally等等。第三部分：照应开头，总结全文。可以对全文作简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的感想、看法或期望。常用到的句式有：In short…,In a word,I think,I expect等