Question

6．I realize I am holding an apple tree in my hand---a little seed with the potential to become a beautiful big tree-a tree that can grow thousands of apples in its lifetime．Thousands of apples，each containing several seeds，each capable of growing a new tree which again can produce thousands of apples．Why then the world isn't filled with apple trees？
    It is a rule of nature that only a few of these seeds grow．And it comes to my mind it's quite often so with people's dreams also．Wonderful ideas come to our minds but they die too soon．The dreams are too far away from our life．And then one day we wonder what has happened to our dreams-why do they never come true？
    I wonder when someone is seriously growing apples，how much work does it require？
    Maybe it is like with our dreams：the seeds of your dreams do not automatically grow．Planting an apple tree，it might take many tries．You might meet dozens of people until you meet the true friend．But if you keep on sowing the seeds of your dream，one day you will succeed．And after that others will comment you are lucky to be successful-when in fact you probably have failed more often than you would like to count．But you are good at failing-you learn，you adapt，and then with your new knowledge you try again．And again．And again．And one day success is yours．
    I pick up the apple seed again-but instead of throwing it away I take an empty flower pot，pour some earth into it and plant the seed．Maybe one day it will grow into a proud tree．
[写作内容]
1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120词谈谈你对实现梦想的看法，内容包括：
 （1）说明现实生活中许多人虽有梦想但没有实现的原因．
 （2）谈谈你如何面对现实，实现自己的人生梦想．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以参考阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：have the potential to do  （有做某事的潜能），grow into（长成），fail to do sth（没能做某事），turn sth into reality（把某事变成现实），…reasons for （…的原因），first of all （首先），a rule of nature （自然规则），in other words（换句话说），work hard（努力工作），make dreams come true （使梦想变成现实），realize one's dreams（实现某人的梦想），keep on doing（继续做某事），get the first prize（获得第一名）．
【高分句型一】
1．First of all，it's a rule of nature that not all seeds can become big apple trees．
此处是由关系代词"that"引导的定语从句，先行词为"nature"，关系代词"that"在从句中作主语．
【高分句型二】
1．Actually，to realize your dreams is like planting an apple tree．
此处是动词不定式作主语，句子的谓语动词为"is"，表语为"like planting an apple tree"．
【高分句型三】
2．My dream is to become a physicist．
此处是动词不定式"to do"作表语，主语为"My dream"，谓语动词为"is"．

解答 Dreams are like the seeds of an apple tree．Every seed has the potential to grow into a big beautiful apple tree．But unfortunately，not all of them can succeed．（概括）
In our real life，many people have their beautiful dreams．But some of them fail to turn them into reality．There are many reasons for their failures．First of all，it's a rule of nature that not all seeds can become big apple trees．【高分句型一】In other words，maybe their dreams are not so realistic．Secondly，when they have their dreams，they don't work hard to make them come true．Actually，to realize your dreams is like planting an apple tree．【高分句型二】You have to keep on sowing the seeds until you succeed．（说明现实生活中许多人虽有梦想但没有实现的原因）
I like physics．My dream is to become a physicist．【高分句型三】Last year，I got the first prize in physics contest in our city．I am sure my dream will be realized if I keep on trying．（个人观点：如何面对现实，实现自己的人生梦想）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．