Question

假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛，你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。

主题	Shall a senior school student take a part-time job in holidays?
观点	1. 高中生重视功课，面对社会所知甚少。
	2．假期做a part-time job是很好的社会实践。
	3. 假期是最好的补偿时间。
	3．通过书本学到的东西不如通过经验学到的东西有效。
	4．通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。
	5．假期做a part-time job的报酬对家里或多或少有些帮助。
结论	高中生……

注意：（社会实践：social practice; 社会：society ; 知识：knowledge ）
1、词数100左右；2、开头已为你写好。
Dear friends,
Here are my points .
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
Here are my points. We students of today paid much attention to our lessons and knew little of society though it’s not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can’t have the same (deep) effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid(be paid) more or less to help our families. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。