Question

5．假定你是李华，你的同学王宁计划寒假后到英国学习英语，请你给你英国的笔友Tom写封信，信的内容要包含以下要点：
简要介绍王宁的情况（喜好英语、性格如何等）．
请Tom多帮忙．
注意：
词数100左右．
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
He is really like English and eager to communicate with native speakers．
他很喜欢英语并且渴望与外国人交流．
高分句型二：
But she doesn't like others to praise her，because she thinks what she did is ordinary．
但她不喜欢别人称赞她，因为她认为她做的很普通．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you recently？
My best friend Wang Ning plans to go to England to learn English after the winter vacation．He  really likes English and eager to communicate with native speakers（高分句型一）．
Wang ning is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others，Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking him for help．But he doesn't like others to praise him，because he thinks what he did is ordinary（高分句型二）．
Finally，I hope you can take care of him during  his days in British．He is a good boy，I believe you will love him．Looking forward to get the good news that you became good friends．
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．