Question

17．新学期你到一所新学校上学，这里的一切和你原来的学校相比有很多不同的地方，学校环境优美，有很好的教学设施，还有足球场等，请以"My New School"为题，用英语写一篇介绍学校的文章．
注意：词数80-100个．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放式作文，根据提示信息写一写"My New School"，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从学校环境优美，有很好的教学设施，还有足球场等来进行描写 2、按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照地点方位的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
This term，I come to a new school，which is diffrent from my former school．（高分句型一）be different from与…不同；带有which引导的定语从句
In the east is a teaching building in which the teachers are working．（高分句型二）本句使用了全倒装；句中带有介词的定语从句
In the south of the school is our playground where we usually have PE lessons there，and we usually play basketball，soccer ball on the playground．（高分句型三）句中带有where引导的定语从句

解答 This term，I come to a new school，which is diffrent from my former school．（高分句型一）There are tall buildings in our school．Our classroom building is in the north of the school．In the east is a teaching building in which the teachers are working．（高分句型二）On the second floor of the building there is a library，where we can find some useful books and we can read all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines，too．In the south of the school is our playground where we usually have PE lessons there，and we usually play basketball，soccer ball on the playground．（高分句型三） Sometimes we read books early in the morning there．In the middle of our school  is a garden，in which there are many kinds of flowers  and they come out in spring．（高分句型四）How beautiful our new school is!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．