Question

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boyin her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must haveheard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

Answer 1

【小题1】去掉a
【小题2】Besides→Beside
【小题3】held→holding
【小题4】occupies →occupied
【小题5】curious→curiously
【小题6】 if →that或去掉if
【小题7】her →my
【小题8】must 和 very 之间加be.
【小题9】words→words
【小题10】for → to

解析试题分析：本文叙述了作者在一次在公交车上看见的一幕，车上人多,有许多人由于没有座位而站着，而在作者的前面有一个妇女抱着一个小男孩，小男孩看见了一位年轻的男士一个人占着两个座位在那里装睡，当这位年轻人听到这位妇女说这位叔叔是由于太勤苦太劳累了，他于是就主动把座位让给了这位妇女。
【小题1】by+表交通工具的名词是固定用法。表交通工具的名词前不用冠词。 所以bus前也不用冠词。
【小题2】Besides意为：而且；Beside 意为：在......的旁边。在此应该理解为：在我的旁边有.......。
【小题3】there be +名词做主语，主谓结构完整。holding a little boy是现在分词短语作后置定语。表示和woman 是逻辑上的主谓关系。意为：有一个抱小孩的妇女。
【小题4】在In front of her, a young man occupies two seats,中 occupies作谓语，应该和整篇文章的时态保持一致。全文都是过去时，这里也应该用动词的过去式形式。
【小题5】在英语中习惯用副词修饰动词，所以要用curiously 来修饰 heard。
【小题6】分析句子： I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. 看到  thought后是一个宾语从句，在宾语从句中if 意为是否，而这里不需要，故去掉或者改为that也可以，that作宾语可以省略。
【小题7】Beyond... expectations, 根据上下文判断，应该是出乎我的预料，而不是她的。
【小题8】must be very tired，表示肯定推测，一定很累。must是情态动词，后要求用动词原形而tired 是形容词，所以需要加be动词符合英语的习惯。
【小题9】word 是不可数名词，消息；words 是可数名词，那些话。结合语境，应该是年轻人听到了那些话更合适。
【小题10】offer sth to sb 是固定搭配，意思是：提供某事给某人。
考点：短文改错。