Question

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to tell you that I’m interesting in the summer camp in Australia and I hope I can be become a member.
My name is Li Nan, a 18-year-old girl from Shaanxi, China, but I’m a Senior One student. As a student, I has learned English for 8 year. And I can communicate with foreigners in English free. As you know, I am a senior student now, so I know China well. I can introduced Chinese culture to foreign friends.
I hope I can accepted. I’m looking forward to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours 
Li Nan

Answer 1

【小题1】interesting →interested
【小题2】去掉be 或become
【小题3】a →an
【小题4】but →and
【小题5】has →have
【小题6】year →years
【小题7】free →freely
【小题8】introduced →introduce
【小题9】accepted →be accepted
【小题10】receive →receiving

解析试题分析：本文是一封书信，叙述了作者想要参加一个去澳大利亚的夏令营的事情。信中介绍了自己的优势—英语不错，可以向外国朋友介绍中国文化，希望尽快收到答复。
【小题1】be interested in 对……感兴趣，主语通常指人，句中是说作者对……感兴趣。
【小题2】be和become重复，所以要去掉一个。
【小题3】在元音音素前要用不定冠词an。
【小题4】在本句中前后是并列关系要用and。
【小题5】has只用在第三人称单数后面，句中主语是I，故has →have。
【小题6】year前是大于一的数字，year要用复数，year →years。
【小题7】英语中要用副词修饰动词，因此本句中free →freely。
【小题8】句中can是情态动词“能”，后接动词原形，故introduced →introduce。
【小题9】由上下文可知，作者希望被接受，要用被动语态，情态动词can后接动词原形，因此用助动词be。
【小题10】look forward to后接V-ing形式，因此receive →receiving。
考点：短文改错。