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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___), 并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:   1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, though the clock rang aloud, Mary didn’t up until eight. She hurried got dressed, snatched over her schoolbag,rushed towards her school. She ran as fast as he could, so that she might miss the first lesson. But to her disappointing. she found the school was quiet. After she entered into the schoolyard,it seemed that there was nobody in the school besides the guard. Mary was wondering what had happened while she saw the word on the bulletin board. It was Sunday.


【小题1】aloud 改为loudly
【小题2】woke 改为wake
【小题3】hurried 改为hurriedly
【小题4】rushed 前加and
【小题5】he 改为she
【小题6】might 后加not
【小题7】disappointing 改为disappointment
【小题8】into 去掉
【小题9】besides 改为except/ but
【小题10】while 改为when

解析试题分析:
【小题1】一天早上,虽然闹铃的声音很吵。副词loudly修饰rang,aloud 意思是“出声地”。
【小题2】玛丽8点才起床。Didn’t后面接动词原形:woke 改为wake
【小题3】她匆忙穿好衣服。用副词hurriedly修饰got dressed
【小题4】got dressed,snatched和 rushed是并列的动作,要在前面加and
【小题5】她尽可能快的跑。用she代替玛丽
【小题6】句意:她赶快跑为了不错过公共汽车。might 后加not
【小题7】to one’s disappointment 使某人失望的是
【小题8】她进入校园后,发现好像没有人。Enter是及物动词,不加介词into 去掉
【小题9】除了门卫没有人,表示“不包括”用except/ but
【小题10】玛丽在想怎么了,这时看见布告牌。while 当…时候,表示“时间段”,when 可以表示“这时”,指时间点。
考点:考查短文改错

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