Question

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
Some post-80s graduates have given up the dream of working in a big city, and heading back home has become part of future job consideration. Two of the more common ones are trying to avoid the intense competition and the pressure, and seeing unprecedented opportunities in the growing economies back home.
Changping. a 22-year-old student from Hainan University, said that if he would decide on starting his business, he’d certainly return to his hometown, Xiangfan，in Hubei Province. That was because he has his own network of people who could help him in every way. Also, he could get some good business ideas like setting up advanced kindergartens in small cities. If no one was doing that, the chance ofbeing successful seemed higher.
But Chen Haihua，a college student from Guangzhou Medical College, said that she would plan to stick to a big city, Guangzhou, instead of going back to her hometown, Zhanjiang, in Guangdong Province. She wanted to struggle in the big city for a more exciting, better life. She explained that she also could be a role model, letting the kids in her hometown work hard Io go to key universities.
【写作内容】
1.   以约30个词概括该短文的内容；
2.   然后以约120个词谈谈你对就业方向的看法，内容包括：
(1 ) 试分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素；
(2)如果你大学毕业了，你会选择在哪里就业？
(3)  选择的理由。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不 得直接引用原文中的句了
2.   作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇迮贯。

Answer 1

Post-80s graduates hold different views towards job choices. Some, like Changping, will head back home to avoid the competition and pressure in big cities, while others, like Chen haihua, would prefer to stay in big cities to seek a better job.
Working in a big city is of course an exciting thing, which means better opportunities and more conveniences. It’s easier to find a well-paid job or a better platform to improve oneself. While in a small town, where there are not so many elites to compete with, one can easily avoid the pressure from fierce competition in big cities to live a rather cosy life.
As for me, a girl from a remote village, I would rather struggle in a big city like Shenzhen to make a living than go back to my hometown. Though hard, struggling itself may gain me enough experience of doing business.
Therefore, after graduation, I will choose a big city as the start of my career. Thanks to the intense competition, I can grow into an experienced and competitive person, which does good to my later development.

解析试题分析：这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，内容包括：(1) 试分析在大城市和回家乡就业各自的有利因素；(2)如果你大学毕业了，你会选择在哪里就业？(3)选择的理由。这道题目要求比较严格，所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
考点：读写任务写作
点评：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。