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阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

In China,with one or two parents going out to earn money,many children are left in their hometown in the countryside.These children are called “leftover children”.A large number of leftover children have emerged since 1978,and the statistics showed in 2004,the total was 22 million.

Usually their grandparents or their parents’ friends or relatives look after these leftover children.Sometimes they are brought up by one of their parents at home.In most cases,their guardians are not quite educated.To them,making sure that the children are healthy and fed well is the most important task,and that the children are safe and sound is considered to have done a good job.But they seldom care about children’s study,their psychological needs,or mental demands.Neither do they spend some time teaching kids how to develop good habits.

Therefore,for most of the time,the leftover children can’t get emotional support from their parents,which can result in so many problems.

【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2.然后以约120个词就“如何关心农村留守儿童(leftover children)的成长?”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:

(1)农村留守孩子存在的原因;

(2)你认为他们面临的最大困难是什么;

(3)解决留守儿童问题的关键是什么;

(4)提出解决问题的措施。

【写作要求】

1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不能直接引用原文的句子;

2.题目自定。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

 

【答案】

Show More Concern About the Leftover Children

The passage points out a worrying phenomenon in China that the leftover children living in the countryside have lacked their parents’ love because their parents have gone to make a fortune in cities.

As we all know,people living in the countryside have to work far away from their family to earn more money in order to create better living conditions for their children.However,the children have been separated from their parents and live with their grandparents or relatives,who are not well educated.So their study,their mental and psychological demands can’t be drawn attention to.In that case,it’s easy for them to get into bad habits,which can’t be corrected in time.What’s worse,the lack of parents’ love may make them feel lonely.

In my opinion,the key to solving the problem is to have love shining over them.Parents should keep in touch with them now and then,and be concerned about their psychological demands.

【解析】本文讲述的是在中国由于父母外出工作,有太多的留守儿童,衍生出 很多的问题。留守儿童出现的因为在于父母离家。最大的困难在于教育方面,爷爷奶奶很难约束住孩子。

要想解决这个问题,关键在于学校与社区及家庭三方面结合,真正关心留守儿童的成长。本文对考生的要求较高,有很强的思想性,和思辨性,梳理要点的时候一定要直接,不要有太多无关话题。写作的时候注意使用合适的连接词和高级句型和词汇。

 

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