Question

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出2条合理建议。
菜价昂贵，菜式单一
排队时间长，浪费午休时间
味道不佳，浪费现象严重
提示词：食堂 canteen
Dear Principal,
Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen.
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I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Principal,
Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. Some students think the prices of dishes are too expensive and the choices of the dishes are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent on waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students argue that the taste of the food is awful which leads to a lot of waste.
Therefore, measures need to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. In my own point of view, I pay more attention to the prices of the food and the time wasted in the queue. I think we can offer various choices with different prices and open more service windows to reduce waiting time.
I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua

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【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见短语have a rest休息， leads to导致， take measures to do采取措施做某事， pay more attention to注意。Another concern is that the time spent on waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest这是个复合句，第一个that引导表语从句，第二个that 与so 连用，so +adj that 如此又至于，spent on waiting做the time 的后置定语。In my own point of view, I pay more attention to the prices of the food and the time wasted in the queue在这个句子中wasted in the queue做the time的后置定语。I think we can offer various choices with different prices and open more service windows to reduce waiting time这个句中think后面跟着宾语从句，and连接offer ,open 两个并列的谓语动词。