Question

假如你校要举办一次主题为“朋友”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇120词左右的演讲稿，
开头已给出，不计人总词数。要点如下：
1.朋友的真谛，尊重并信任朋友；2.择友的标准；3.如何对待朋友，至少两点；
4.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone. I'd like to share my ideas about friends with you
Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. As friends, respect and trust are the most important factors. They will accept you for who you are without trying to change you. Trust is another aspect. A true friend will be honest and be someone you can depend on.
When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.
But how to treat friends is the key to making good friends.  First, understand them more. I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together. Second, listen to them more. I like listening and talking things over with them.
Thanks for listening.

试题分析：试题贴近考生实际生活，给出的要点比较简略，主要围绕“朋友”这个话题展开，其中如何对待朋友，要求给出自己的观点，属于半开放性话题,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(120词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。尤其是如何对待朋友，部分要求给出自己的建议，要注意不要偏离文章中心
【亮点说明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,second,等承接词进行连接,层次清晰。(2)词组的使用和多变的高级句式：depend on.Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow. 这句话用了定语从句， They will accept you for who you are without trying to change you. 这句话用了宾语从句，When it comes to making friends, I would like to make friends with those who are kind, honest and responsible.这句话用了固定句型和定语从句，I usually put myself in their shoes so that we can share lots of ideas together.这句话用了结果状语从句。