Question

美国朋友Jane 在中国过了两年， 即将回国。 假定你是李华，现在由你给她写封信，邀请她星期六晚上来你家参加晚会。要点如下：
祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，大家都为她感到高兴。
感谢她帮助你们学习英语。
非常怀念那些野餐、郊游、聚会和一起度过的好时光。
注意：词数100左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。郊游：outgoing 聚会(n.)：get-together
Dear Jane,
Your letter reached me yesterday ____________________________________  
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Yours
Li Hua 

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
Your letter reached me yesterday. I’m very glad you are doing so well in your studies. Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
How do you enjoy your years in China? You have really made such rapid progress that it often sounds that you were a Chinese girl. We are proud of you. And we all appreciate your help with our English. We will always remember the picnics, outgoings, get-togethers and the wonderful time we spent together.
What a pity you have to go back so soon. We’re going to have a party at my place this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00?We’ll have dinner together.
Yours
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，邀请她参加欢送会。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生发挥的余地较小，只需要翻译成英语即可，写作的时候要把所有的要点都包括在内，不要遗漏。同时注意使用被动语态，倒装句等不同的句式，让文章充满变化，不要那么的死板。同时要使用高级的词汇和词组提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如do well in，congratulations on，make rapid progress，be proud of，What a pity，go back；并注意了句子的衔接如and，such … that …等等。