Question

假设你是高一新生李华。月考之后，你的英语老师Ms Shen 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1. 对英语学习的认识；
2. 自己目前的英语水平；
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4.对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.信的开头和结尾已给出。
（书面表达写在下一页）
Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
_______________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is become a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorise new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文，是老师征求学生对自己教学的意见。只是大概给出三个方面，具体的要点要由学生自己来添加，在第一部分中要充分表示出对英语重要性的认识，把英语作文一门非常重要的学科来学习。第二部分可以具体阐述自己的学习问题，如阅读能力不强，写作不熟练，词汇有较大问题；对老师教学的建议可以从多给学生练习的方面着手。
点评：半开放性作文对考生的要求较高，要求考生自己筛选要点，合理组织要点和谋篇布局。在写作时注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇句型，提高文章的层次和档次。