Question

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

李明：高个子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA985

到达：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

_______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你以李华的名义给笔友Peter写封信，根据要点，用英语给他写封信，要点比较详细，要在审题的基础上，全面的表达要点，不能遗漏，注意本文使用一般将来时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

使用了定语从句，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象also等词，这样文章显得更连贯。

考点：考查书信类短文写作。

点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。