Question

书面表达 (满分25分)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，在3月12日植树节（Tree-Planting Day）这一天，你和班里同学去郊区植树。请根据以下图画内容，并以 “Green Action in Our Class”为题，给Teens 的Star Letter栏目写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们的植树活动，并谈谈自己的感想。

注意：1. 短文须包括所有图画内容；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

2. 词数100词左右。

提示词：郊区suburbs

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Green Action in Our Class

On March 12, the Tree-Planting Day, we had a meaningful experience, one I’ll never forget.

Early in the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately, some digging holes, some carrying and planting young trees，and others watering them. We had a wonderful teamwork! With all work done, we decided to put up a board to remind people to protect these trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action.

Tired but happy, we all went home with a sense of achievement. I feel it our duty to plant trees every year and I firmly believe if everyone plants a tree each year, our planet will become much more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作首先总起句对3月12日所做的事情进行描写，这是一次有意义的活动we had a meaningful experience，进而对第一幅图进行描写，我们骑单车去郊区植树we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees，然后对第二幅图的内容进行描写，一些人挖坑，一些人植树，其余的在浇水some digging holes, some carrying and planting young trees，and others watering them.在所有的事情做完后我们树立了一个牌子，提醒人们保护这些树木put up a board to remind people to protect these trees.最后一幅图表示我们进行了拍照留念we took some photos to record our green action.最后再谈一谈自己的感想，尽管很累但都有一种成就感a sense of achievement.我坚信如果每个人都一年植一棵树，那么我们的地球将会变得越来越美丽I firmly believe if everyone plants a tree each year, our planet will become much more beautiful.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文的写作不难，对于叙事类文体，对文章的条理性要把握好，在写作过程注意使用“起承转合”的词语或是句型表达，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。