One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.
40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.
However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.
In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.
试题分析：本篇写作题材是对使用网络语言的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段反对的观点及依据；第三段赞同的观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
【亮点说明】本文较好完成了题目规定的任务，要点齐全、层次清楚、行文连贯。用词不落俗套。如用not in favor of而不是多数考生会用的against表示“反对”，用fond of代替for. 在表达自己观点的时候更是直截了当，Worse still, 更糟糕的是，起到连接的作用，I don’t think it good to use Web Language.体现了表达的多样性。but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.这句话使用了现在分词做状语。
