Question

前不久，中央电视台“焦点访谈”栏目曾就“中国式过马路”现象进行了不少采访和评论。请用英语写一篇100-120 词的短文，结合自己的所见所闻或亲身经历描述“行人闯红灯”(pedestrians run the red light)引发的若干问题，并就此提出一些解决措施。 注意;短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。
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Answer 1

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Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.
There is a very common phenomenon around us that people just run the light totally ignoring the running vehicles, which can lead to serious consequences. Last week a traffic accident happened near our school, a rushing car knocked down a student who was running the red light. And because of the car’s sudden stop, several cars behind crashed into each other. Of course this caused a terrible traffic jam
In my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, we can make good use of the media, such as TV, newspaper, magazine, to raise people’s awareness of obeying the traffic rules and road safety. Second, government must make severe laws to punish people who dare to break the law and run the red light.

试题分析：本文的话题是“中国式过马路”就是指一些人不顾红灯，直接过马路。原因和危害在要点里都列了出来。看法和希望：考生可以提出加强交通安全教育，以多种方式提升国民的交通意识等等。从这些方面着手。提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
【亮点说明】这篇文章涵盖了要点，简洁又不乏好的短语和句型：because of因为,由于， crashed into撞上， In my opinion在我看来, make good use of充分利用，There is a very common phenomenon around us that people just run the light totally ignoring the running vehicles, which can lead to serious consequences. 这句话使用了分隔式同位语从句和定语从句，Last week a traffic accident happened near our school, a rushing car knocked down a student who was running the red light. 这句话也使用了定语从句，government must make severe laws to punish people who dare to break the law and run the red light. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语和定语从句。
还有范文还使用了First, Second这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。