Question

【题目】某英文网站正在开展关于“是否取消黄金周’’的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述目前存在的两种看法，并陈述你的观点，以便向该网站投稿。

赞成取消的人认为：	反对取消的人认为：	你的观点
1.给交通、旅游者安全和环境带来巨大的压力； 2. 购票难； 3. 服务质量下降	1. 消费需求得到满足； 2. 促进旅游业和经济发展	? ……

注意：

1．词数：150词；

2．参考词汇：黄金周the Golden Week（或以the GW代替）

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Answer 1

【答案】In recent days,a discussion is being carried on about whether the Golden Week should be cancelled.

Some people agreed to cancel the Golden Week. They pointed out that nationwide traveling has put big pressure on transportation, tourist safety and the environment. The Golden Week resulted in crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service decline.

However,other people argued the Golden Week had encouraged people to spend more during the seven-day holiday, so it had brought huge profits to the nation's tourist industry and promoted

the ewth.

Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are becoming even stronger,1 still think people need to relax and a common vacation time is very important. But the government should

take into consideration not only incomes, but also the satisfaction of those who take the holiday.

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给网站投稿，描述该网站进行的“是否取消黄金周”的讨论，把赞成和取消的看法介绍清楚，同时一定要表明自己的观点。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。即要把赞同和反对的观点描述完整，还要有自己对“是否取消黄金周”的观点。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（关于“是否取消黄金周”的讨论）；第二段：陈述赞成和反对的观点以及描述原因；第三段：表明自己的观点。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：进行时被动语态和宾语从句的使用a discussion is being carried on about whether the Golden Week should be cancelled.；现在分词making…做结果状语The Golden Week resulted in crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service decline.；含有同位语从句和宾语从句的复合句Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are becoming even stronger,1 still think people need to relax and a common vacation time is very important.。2.使用了过渡词语：However， 等。3.使用了重要短语：point out指出；result in导致；not only…but also不仅…而且。