Question

你是李强。你收到了你在英国的笔友Charlie来信，他在信中询问你的暑假计划，请就你的暑假计划给他写一封回信。
去乡下看望祖父母，时间为一个星期。
去电脑培训中心学电脑，时间为一个星期。
读一些英语书籍，但不知该读哪些，请对方提些建议。
表示收到来信的心情；向对方父母问好；
盼望复信。

Answer 1

Dear Charlie，
How are you. I’m happy to receive your letter. My summer vocation will start at the end of June and end in middle of August. Now I’ll tell you about my plan for my summer vacation.
I plan to visit my grandparents who live in the country during my summer vacation. I miss them very much. Besides, I will spend a week taking a summer course in the computer, hoping it will help improve my computer study. What’s more, I would like to read more books. But I don’t know what to read.  I’d appreciate it if you are kind enough to give me some suggestions. So I think I will have a busy and colorful summer vocation. By the way, remember me to your parents.
What about your plan for holiday? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Qiang

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文：要求你给你在英国的笔友Charlie写一封回信。告知你的暑假计划，，要点给的很全面细致，因此考生首先要根据所给提纲和要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】 I plan to visit my grandparents who live in the country during my summer vacation.这句话用了定语从句， I will spend a week taking a summer course in the computer, hoping it will help improve my computer study.这句话用了现在分词做状语， But I don’t know what to read.这句话用了疑问词+不定式，  I’d appreciate it if you are kind enough to give me some suggestions. 这句话用了it做形式主语，还有文章还使用 Besides, What’s more,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。