Question

假定你是某外国语学校高二年级2班的学习委员，经常看到有同学抄袭作业，针对这种现象，你将主题班会上组织全班同学讨论这一现象，并以“My opinion on copying others’ homework”为主题作中心发言，请事先用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意：1．发言稿须包括以下内容要点；
A．抄袭的主要原因。  B．抄袭的危害及解决办法。C．简要表明自己的态度。
2．词数：不少于120个词；
3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
May I have your attention, please?
My topic today is about copying others’ homework. As we know, some students copy others’ homework

Answer 1

May I have your attention, please?
My topic today is about copying others’ homework.
As we know, some students copy others’ homework. On one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school . Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in their lesson, some students copy others’ homework not only to finish the assignments but also to please their teachers.
In a word, copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it’s against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn to teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.
Personally, it’s for our own sake to study. We should try our best to gain knowledge. Let’s take action to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.
Thank you for your attention.

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如As we know, do masses of homework both at home and at school, not only to finish the assignments but also to please their teachers.,这里用了非限制性定语从句，Sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. 这句话用了too…to…结构，Being students, we should be honest and work hard这句话是现在分词做状语，还运用了If引导的状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：On one hand，On the other hand；In a word；Personally等等。