Question

假如你叫李华，高中开学已经两个月了，请根据下表写一封电子邮件告知你的朋友张宁有关你新学校的一些情况。词数：100左右。

学校概况	6，000多名学生，88个班级，500多名教职员工
班级情况	高一485班；70名学生，其中40名男生，30名女生
班主任	一位女老师，教英语，心地善良，工作严谨
学习科目	语文，数学，英语等

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Ning,
I have been here for two months . Everything here is going well. There are over 6,000 students and 88 classes with more than 500 teachers and staff in our school. The teachers in our school are all enthusiastic and work very hard. We have Chinese, Math and English classes, etc. I’m in Class 485, Grade 1.There are 70 students including 40 boys and 30 girls in my class. Our English teacher is our head teacher. She is very kind but strict and serious about her work. We all think that she is a great teacher. I’ll do my best in all my subjects. I hope you can come to my new school to have a look.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文章要点全面，句式简洁但是富有变化：Everything here is going well. 这句话用了词组go well“进展顺利”，There are over 6,000 students and 88 classes with more than 500 teachers and staff in our school. 这句话有with复合结构， There are 70 students including 40 boys and 30 girls in my class.这句话用了介词including的用法， She is very kind but strict and serious about her work. We all think that she is a great teacher. 这句话用了宾语从句， I hope you can come to my new school to have a look. 这句话用了定语从句。