Question

在很多公众场合，我们都可以看到“中式英文”（Chinglish）的标识，我们是否应该彻底清理这些 Chinglish 呢？请结合下面信息，以“Should We Get Rid of Chinglish?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 赞成 1.外国人很难看懂。2.我们应该学习标准英文。 反对 1.“中式英文”丰富了英语本身。2.“中式英文”为我们的生活增添了乐趣。 你的观点 ？ 

Answer 1

Nowadays Chinglish signs can be seen in many public places, especially in big cities. People have different opinions on whether we should get rid of Chinglish.
On one hand, some people are in favor of getting rid of it. They think it is difficult for foreigners to understand those Chinglish signs. What’s more, we should learn standard English.
However, on the other hand, other people are against the idea. In their opinion, for one thing, Chinglish makes English more colourful. For another, Chinglish adds much pleasure to our life.
As far as I’m concerned, we should learn standard English instead of Chinglish. Only in this way can we communication with foreigners better.

试题分析：本篇写作题材是对中式英语的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；正方观点及依据；反方观点及依据；还有自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】文章结构清楚，句式多变：People have different opinions on whether we should get rid of Chinglish. 这句话有宾语从句， They think it is difficult for foreigners to understand those Chinglish signs.这句话用了it的形式主语， Chinglish makes English more colourful.这句话用的是复合宾语， As far as I’m concerned, 这是“就我而言”，we should learn standard English instead of Chinglish. 这句话用了instead of，Only in this way can we communication with foreigners better. 这句话用了倒装句，还有文章用了On one hand, What’s more, However, on the other hand, for one thing,For another,这样的起到连接作用的词组，使文章更加连贯。