Question

Growing Pains（《成长的烦恼》）是大陆较早引进的一部美国情景喜剧，讲述的是西佛一家的三个孩子在成长中遇到一些故事。而你们在自己的成长过程中也一定碰到过一些挫折，失败，而长大的标志是你在这些经历中获得了一些宝贵的财富。请以 Gains from Growing Pains 为题，写一篇不少于120词的英语短文。（开头已经给出，不计入字数。）
要求：1. 描述成长过程中的一件令你烦恼的事情。
2. 说说此事最终带给你的启示和收获。
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time. It means we have to work hard. As for my childhood, my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends. I got very annoyed .I hated music, just because it was what they wanted me to do. Sometimes I felt puzzled and trapped. I even didn’t understand why I was a child.
Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life. I come to realize why my parents are always pushing me along. Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just small pains in life. A little hard work and sweat never hurt us.
If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success, we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.

试题分析：
此篇书面表达是夹叙夹议的记叙文。描述成长中的烦恼以及它所带来的收获，内容贴近生活，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作内容。考生在写作之前要认真审题，把握两个要点，即烦恼和收获启示；注意文章的时态，要求让“你”描述成长过程中的烦恼，所以要用一般过去时，而且用第一人称。同时要注意句子的衔接。
【亮点说明】文中定语从句和非谓语的使用不但使文章衔接紧凑，而且为文章增色不少，比如“Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life” . “Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just small pains in life.”，此外“we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.”也为点睛之笔。文章描述精彩感人，读后会给人带来深刻启示。