Question

书面表达（25分）
假定你是李华，请以“节约------从身边做起”（Save in everyday life)为题.给China Daily写一封信，呼吁厉行节约。
要点：1.世界许多地方缺水、缺油、缺资源。
2.许多人浪费了大量的资源，并且污染越来越严重。
3.积极参加行动节约从自我做起（上学骑自行车或步行；吃饭不用一次性筷子；用纸要用两面等等）
1. 覆盖以上内容，可作适当发挥；    
2. 发言的开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；      3. 词数：120左右。
Dear Editor,
I am writing to call on more people to save in our daily life.________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li  Hua.

Answer 1

Dear Editor，
I’m writing to call on more people to save in our daily life.
As we all know, the natural resources are limited. We don’t have enough water, oil or forest in many places. At the same time, some people are wasting a lot, which leads to the environment’s getting worse. What is worse, air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.
As a middle school student, we should take an active part in creating a society that saves. In my opinion, we students should do something to stop wasting. We can save food, water, and paper, electricity, etc, in our daily. Meanwhile, we should take buses instead of cars, refuse to use chopsticks which are only used once and don’t use plastic bags.
I hope everyone can make a slight change and it will make a big difference to our world.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：本文的写作重在语句之间的逻辑关系要紧密有条理，对于此类议论文一般采用“三段式”文体进行写作。首先对现在自然资源的紧缺现象进行描写，用At the same time，What is worse等来分清楚句子层次之间的关系；然后，作为一名中学生从自我出发写明应该如何做，按照题目中的提示来展开；最后，发出倡议呼吁节约，进行总结。
考点：提纲类写作
点评：议论文是比较容易写的文体，平时学生的练习也比较多。写的过程中注意避免使用中式英文，对于表达内容层次时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装（only when…,can we …）、虚拟(It is high time that we should …)来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。