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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the last summer holiday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we chatted happily and enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after other. Then which came into view were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents; house. Ti red as I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, whom I haven't seen for a long time. It was really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken such a long-distance train.

Answer 1

【答案】pay后面加a；was错误，改为were；baggages错误，改为baggage；beautifully错误，改为beautiful；other错误，改为another；which错误，改为what；In错误，改为After；去掉but；haven't错误，改为 hadn't；excited错误，改为exciting
【解析】①pay后面加a 考查固定短语。Pay a visit to 拜访；
②was错误，改为were 考查主谓一致。主语是a large number of people，谓语动词用复数形式；
③baggages错误，改为baggage 考查名词。Baggage是不可数名词；
④beautifully错误，改为beautiful 考查形容词。形容词用来修饰名词views.
⑤other错误，改为another 考查代词。One after anther 一个接一个；
⑥which错误，改为what 考查主语从句。句意：进入视野的是绿色的庄稼。
⑦In错误，改为After考查介词 。句意：六个小时的旅行之后，我们到达 了外婆家；
⑧去掉but考查连词。As在句子已经表示虽然，英语中没有but；
⑨haven't错误，改为hadn't 考查动词的时态。根据I was happy to see my grandparents可知发生在过去，没有见面这个动作发生在过去的过去，用过去完成时；
⑩excited错误，改为 exciting 考查形容词。excited 用来修饰人，exciting用来修饰物；