Question

假如你叫李华，是我市一名中学生。最近，当地政府正计划实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的广泛争议。请你根据人们不同的观点，给当地报社写一封信，反映这一情况。

赞成观点	反对观点
1．能够解决交通问题，方便人民生活； 2．有助于太原旅游业的快速发展。	1．会产生噪音，打扰居民平静的生活； 3．时常造成交通堵塞。

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句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
参考词汇：快速公交系统BRT 高架桥overpass
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is going to take place in our city.
                                                                               
                                                                               
Yours truly

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is going to take place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.
Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Shantou as a modern tourist city in the southeast of Guangdong province.
But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

试题分析：考查议论文写作：本篇写作题材是当地政府正计划实施快速公交和桥梁建设的不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，为总述；正方观点及依据；反方观点及依据；要注意的是：在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
【亮点说明】Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.这是一个非限制性定语从句， Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable.这句话用了宾语从句和原因状语从句，the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.这句话有宾语从句也有定语从句，还有这篇范文使用Besides, What’s worse, 这样的关联词，使文章更顺畅。