Question

央视时空调查栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的三种形式作了一个网上调查，调查的结果如下，你作为一名即将参加高考的考生，请简要的描述调查的结果，并谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。

注意： 1. 150词左右，文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当添加细节以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：填报志愿 choose one’s major or university   
According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, _______________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
According to a survey carried out by Horizon research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. Among the 1,874 students who participate in the survey, most students，about 82%，insist that the choices should be based on their scores after examinations. In their opinions, they can choose their ideal majors and universities according to their scores.12% of the students, however, believe that the choices should be made directly after the examinations. And there are still 6% of the students holding the idea that the choice should be carried out before exams.
Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score. Having known the test score,we can make a proper choice. Yet the other two will add up more blindness . When we make our choices. In addition, if the choices are made before exams, it may bring anxiety during the exams, which of course will have negative effects on our performances in the exams.

试题分析：本文是篇图表作文。考生在写作之前必须认真读图分析含义。要求你作为即将参加高考的考生对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的三种形式所作的一个网上调查结果进行简要的描述 ，并谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。首先确定文章的时态，要求是描述调查结果，和个人看法及理由，应该用一般现在时。人称注意变化。还应该注意句子的复杂性和衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 according to， participate in，in one’s opinion, be based on，have effects on等，还运用了 非谓语动词做状语; which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：however，In addition，等等。