Question

20．以"Form a Good Habit"为题，谈谈早起的好处．要求言之有理，内容连贯，可参考以下提示：
1．有些学生迟到，是因 为晚起；
2．晚起不仅影响学习，而且也是一种坏习惯； 
3．早起是一种好习惯，因为它能给你带来很多好处．早起有助于身体健康，有助于学习，有助于品德培养．希望大家养成早起的习惯（注：品德培养 train character）

Answer 1

分析 点明这是一篇关于早起好处的作文，根据题目要求可知，用第一人称和一般现在时态，内容包括：一好习惯的好处；二点明主题；三晚起的影响；四早起带来很多好处；五总结语．
高分句型：
1．However，no one can deny the fact that some students are often late for class，because of  getting up late．句子里the fact后的 that从句是同位语从句，表示事实的内容．
可是没人能够否认这个事实，一些学生犹豫起床晚而上课迟到．
2．Getting up early is a good habit，which can benefit you a lot．句子里Getting up early 做主语，谓语动词一第三人称单数；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词 a good habit．
早起是一个好习惯，它会使你受益良多．

解答 It is universally acknowledged that good habits are indispensable to us，for it does good to our life．（好习惯的好处） As a senior high school student，we should get into a good habit of getting up early．（点明主题）Because with a happy mood and clear head，we in turn make progress in our study．However，no one can deny the fact that some students are often late for class，because of  getting up late．【高分句型一】Getting up late not only affects their studies but also is a bad habit．（（晚起的影响）
Getting up early is a good habit，which can benefit you a lot．【高分句型二】For one thing，getting up early，after all，helps you to be healthy．The fresh air in the morning makes you think more quickly than any other time of the day．what's more，you can memorize what you have learned easily．For another，getting up early can also help you to train your character．Some students can get up early，but some can not．This needs perseverance..An old saying goes in English，"Early to bed，and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．"This is very true．，（早起带来很多好处）
I sincerely hope everyone will form the good habit of getting up early．Only in this way can we study  much more better．（总结语）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作完成以后要通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误．