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8．假如你是李华，是高三某班班长．为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级准备成立一个自行车俱乐部（cycling club）．请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则口头通知．通知如下：
1．每周训练一次，由体育老师辅导，安排在每周三下午第三节的课外活动时间；
2．注意事项：自备自行车；活动免费．
3．到班长那里报名．
注意：
 1．词数120左右；  
 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
 3．文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Attention，please，everyone．Ever since we entered Senior 3，we've burdened ourselves with a lot of work____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 分析要求可知，假如你是高三某班班长．为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级准备成立一个自行车俱乐部（cycling club）．请你根据提示，用英语写一则口头通知．短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称．尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意英语的习惯表达，句子之间的连贯性，增强写作的规范性．
【亮点说明】文中用了一些高级的短语和句式．如：burdened ourselves with，It is desired that，as原因状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，who引导的定语从句，What needs to be specifically noted is that主语从句等都很不错．
 To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study，we've decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities．（高分句型一）
  We plan to offer basic training once a week，which will be instructed by our PE teacher．（高分句型二）
It is desired that you take time to join our club，as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves．（高分句型三）
What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge，but you should bring your  bicycle along．（高分句型四）

解答 Attention，please，everyone．Ever since we entered Senior 3，we've burdened ourselves with a lot of work．To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study，we've decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities．（高分句型一）
     We plan to offer basic training once a week，which will be instructed by our PE teacher．（高分句型二）It will fall on the third period in the afternoon，when students are having after-class activities．
     It is desired that you take time to join our club，as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves．（高分句型三） What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge，but you should bring your  bicycle along．（高分句型四）
     Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up．
     That's all．Thank you．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．