Question

根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。
（1）一些人认为财富能带来快乐。
（2）另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。
（3）提出自己的看法。
注意：单词数120个左右。
Wealth and Happiness
Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.                         
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not everything

试题分析：这是一篇议论文，文章是讨论财富与快乐的关系，这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述、正方和反方的论述，以及自己观点。有难度的是，这篇文章只是给了提纲，没有具体的要点，要求在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. 这句话是it做形式主语， After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.这句话用了动名词， when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. 这句话有时间状语从句，And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. 这句话里面用了现在分词做状语，
I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society这句话用了固定句型：There is no doubt that…...。