Question

在高中即将毕业之际，请你用英语准备一篇“国旗下讲话”的演讲稿。
内容要求：
1. 高中三年的收获和遗憾；
2. 展望大学生活所面临的挑战；
3．对高一，高二学生的建议。
注意：
1. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现考生的具体信息；
4. 词数120左右。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning!
As I am graduating, I’d like to ____________________________________________
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

As I am graduating, I’d like to look back on my unforgettable years here.
In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.
However, during this period, I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities. That left me a little regretful and will always remind me to better myself in an all-round way.
Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself. But I’m full of confidence that I’ll get used to it soon and move on.
I also want to make some suggestions to you, Senior 1 and 2 students. Time and tide wait for no man. We teenagers should make the most of our valuable time at high school and realize our full potential.
Good luck to all of you!
Yours
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一封演讲稿。话题是要求用英语准备一篇“国旗下讲话”的演讲稿。具有很强的可写性，内容贴近考生的实际情况，考生有话可说，有话可写。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥。在写作的过程中要注意使用合适的连接词，同时也要注意使用一些高级的句型如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。本更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：for one thing，What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】In the past three years, I’ve benefited a lot from my school education, which helps me grow into an independent thinker and an efficient learner, as well as preparing for the future.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和as well as这样的关联词，I was too concerned about my academic performance to get actively involved in the extra-curriculum activities.这句话用的是too…to…结构，和get involved in词组，Looking ahead, I think the biggest challenge in my college life will be adapting to a life away from my parents and taking care of myself.这句话使用非谓语动词做状语和adapt to这个词组。