Question

李华准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平。请发e­mail告知他学英语的方法。
提示：1.养成良好的学习英语的习惯(如……)；
2.多看英语电视节目和电影，扩大词汇量；
3.要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数)；
3.以第一人称写。
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Yours，
Deanne

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ming,
I’m glad to offer you some advice.
In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English. Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . Also, reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you. In addition, you should have confidence in yourself. Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, you are sure to improve your English.
I hope that my advice will be helpful.
Yours,
Deanne

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。李华准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平。请发e­mail告知他学英语的方法。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English.这句话是动名词做主语，Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . 这句话里面用了原因状语从句和have access to这个词组， reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you.这句话里面用了非限制性定语从句 Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. 这句话用了让步状语从句和省略，还有谚语，还有考生要学习使用Also, In addition,等关联词