假设你是李华.在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物.礼物是一个标有姓名.生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子.收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意.请给你的英国笔友Johnson发一封邮件.内容包括以下要点:1.描述网购的礼物, 2.介绍网上支付及配送情况, 3.谈谈你对网上购物的看法.注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出.不计入总� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假设你是李华，在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物。礼物是一个标有姓名、生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子。收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意。请给你的英国笔友Johnson发一封邮件，内容包括以下要点：
1.描述网购的礼物； 2.介绍网上支付及配送情况； 3.谈谈你对网上购物的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.支付宝安全控件 Alipay Security Control
Dear Johnson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hu

Dear Johnson,
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.
Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?
I have enjoyed shoppingonline very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet. Agree with me?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求给你的英国笔友Johnson发一封邮件，。介绍你网上购物的情况和你对网上购物的看法。要点都已经给出，要表达清楚，不要有遗漏，审题时注意时态的选择，如果是讲述自己的网购经历，就是一般过去式，如果是介绍自己对网购的看法，就是一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，象for instance, Furthermore,等词，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】范文中使用了一些高级词汇和复杂句型，如：It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. 这句话用过去分词做定语，It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.这句话用了so ….that….句型， I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，And so is the delivery service.这句话用了倒装句， There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .这句话用了固定句型，此外，范文还使用了 Besides,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查书信类作文

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