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12．假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的李华，下周五学生会将举办一期以"My Perfect Teacher"为主题的英文演讲活动，请你根据表格内容写一份演讲稿介绍英语李老师．
注意：1．不少于60词，可适当添加细节以使文章流畅；
2．开头已给出．
Hello，everyone，I would like to tell you something about Miss Li，who is the perfect teacher in my mind．Miss Li is a lady of medium height，who always wears glasses．Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）She is a teacher with great responsibility．Whenever I come to her office，I can see her buried in piles of work or talking to a student patiently．She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）She gets on well with the students and we all trust her and are willing to share any secrets with her．
Miss Li works so hard that she is always the first one to come and the last one to leave the office，which encourages me to be a diligent person as she is．（高分句型四）In a word，Miss Li is a perfect teacher deserving our respect．
Thanks！．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息针对"是否父母应该被允许看你的微信朋友圈"这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：not only，but also不仅，而且； a variety of各种各样的； be willing to愿意做某事；In a word总之；
Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）
She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone，I would like to tell you something about Miss Li，who is a perfect teacher in my mind．
     Miss Li is a lady of medium height，who always wears glasses．Not only is she selfless and optimistic，but she also teaches us to have a positive attitude towards life．（高分句型一）She is a teacher with great responsibility．Whenever I come to her office，I can see her buried in piles of work or talking to a student patiently．She is a good and experienced teacher who can teach based on students'different levels．（高分句型二）She always organizes a variety of activities including vocabulary tests，speech contests，stage performances and so on，which arouse everyone's interest．（高分句型三）She gets on well with the students and we all trust her and are willing to share any secrets with her．
     Miss Li works so hard that she is always the first one to come and the last one to leave the office，which encourages me to be a diligent person as she is．（高分句型四）In a word，Miss Li is a perfect teacher deserving our respect．
     Thanks！

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．