Question

请你仔细观察图片，写一篇120字的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：

1. 简单叙述图片中的内容；
2. 谈谈父母对你的期待；
3. 你的看法和对将来的打算。
注意： 1. 词数120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节要点，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
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Answer 1

As is shown in the picture above, different parents have different expectations of children. Some parents are rich but they don’t have much education. So they hope that their children can go to college to be well-educated. For some, things are just the opposite. They want their children to make money.
My parents, though they are poor, don’t wish me to make money at an early time. They say school education is vital for a poor family. Qualified education is the first wise choice, which later makes a promising future.
I’m completely for what my parents expect of me. I believe wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand. To live up to my parents’ dreams, I will make every effort to be a wise learner and a brave discoverer in the future.

试题分析：本文文意新颖，寓意深刻。学生首先对图片的内容进行简单的陈述，如不同的父母亲对孩子有不同的期望different parents have different expectations of children.分别对两者截然相反的观点进行说明，然后，结合自身的情况，谈谈自己父母对自己的期望，可以用They say school education is vital for a poor family.来表达或是运用have a far-reaching effect on这个句型来表达教育对自己有深远的影响，最后说明自己的看法和打算，说明自己非常赞同父母的观点，说明智慧比金钱更重要wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.自己将不遗余力的去实现自己的梦想make every effort to do sth.
点评：本文的写作是高考近几年的趋势，利用图片的内容来表达观点，此类文章首先需要对图片内容进行介绍，然后根据要求写作。注意对不会的表达进行替换，同时注意避免使用中式英文和硬译。对于高中作文的写作要注意多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。