Question

近几年来，越来越多的人们开始意识到愈演愈烈的环境污染问题。请结合下表提示以“Protect the Environment”为题写篇短文，谈谈自己的观点看法。

环境问题	空气和水的严重污染；过度砍伐树木。
保护环境的重要性	生态平衡正在被破坏，由此，人类的生存也正在面临威胁。
我的看法	……

 生态的 a. ecological 威胁 v. threaten

Answer 1

Protect the Environment
Environmental pollution has become more and more serious in recent years. The pollution of air and water is especially severe, which will do great harm to people’s health. What’s more, a great number of trees have been cut down. The whole ecological balance of the Earth is being damaged nowadays, so people’s existence is also being threatened. So it becomes more and ore important to protect the environment.
In my opinion, to protect the environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. For instance it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Furthermore, each person should take part and make small changes like taking public transport and so on. Let’s take action together from now on.

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。