Question

假如你叫李明，即将高中毕业，准备到英国读大学。现在你有一些关于雅思考试（International English Language Testing System,简称 IELTS ）的问题需要咨询，请你写一封信向你的英国笔友David 请教你所关注的以下问题：
雅思考试的时间和主要内容。
应该如何准备阅读、写作等考试内容。
希望David 给出一些建议及推荐复习用书
向David 表示感谢，期待回信。
注意：1.词数 100 左右。
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
How are you ?                                                                              
                                                                                    
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear David,
How are you ? I am writing to you for some information. As I am graduating this June and planning to further education in Britain soon, I want to consult you about IELTS.I am wondering when IELTS begins and what it tests. What’s more , as a foreign student, what should I do to be prepared for comprehension, writing, hearing and so on? Now that it is so important for me, I have to make an effort to prepare for IELTS , which may help me make a big difference. Thus , I hope you can give me some advice and recommend some information such as books and learning skills for IELTS .
I am very grateful to you whether you can lend me a hand or not. I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

试题分析：本文的写作首先对写信的目的进行说明，及介绍自己马上就要毕业去国外学习的想法As I am graduating this June and planning to further education in Britain soon, I want to consult you about IELTS.然后询问有关雅思考试的时间和内容I am wondering when IELTS begins and what it tests. 应该如何准备阅读、写作等考试内容what should I do to be prepared for comprehension, writing, hearing and so on?进而希望David 给出一些建议及推荐复习用书I hope you can give me some advice and recommend some information such as books and learning skills for IELTS，最后表达期望得到David的回信和帮助I am looking forward to your reply.
点评：本文的写作不难，对于叙事类文体，对文章的条理性要把握好，在写作过程注意使用“起承转合”的词语或是句型表达，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。