Question

在班内，同学们就“青少年是否该吸烟”展开了讨论。讨论结果如下：

人数	观点	理由
80%	反对	危害身体健康；一旦成瘾，很难戒除；影响他人健康等。
20%	赞成	深处重压时，可以缓解压力；一种时尚，感觉很酷……

请根据表格写一篇短文，并表明自己的观点。
要求：1.字数120左右。
2.根据提示可适当扩展，但要保持流畅连贯。开头已给出。
Recently, we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes.

Answer 1

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Recently, we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes.
On one hand, about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes. In their opinion, smoking can help them ease their pressure when they are under heavy stress. Besides, smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers.
However, on the other hand , about 80% object to it.  They think smoking does great damage to their body; Once they are addicted to it, it ‘ll be rough to quit it. What’s more, smoking also has a harmful effect on others, non-smokers in particular. More importantly, if you are a heavy smoker, you’ll smell terrible. That’s why sometimes you find it difficult to communicate with others.
As far as I’m concerned, adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking. That’s because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term.

试题分析：英语写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。本篇写作题材是社会现象的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。